Okay – when I started the re-write I realised that actually you hadn’t had the chance to notice the loooooong day because I had read a couple more chapters – well in all honestly there are only a couple more chapters written. However, it did mean that for you the day was probably still reasonable length. So, I could have got away with that one!!
in the end it wasn’t too much of a re-write I just had to mention dawn!.
You can have that chapter later and we’ll just keep this little faux pas between us shall we. 🙂